By Orah Dawn Levin-Minder
When brittle leaves begin to fade and fall, my four-year-old son and I go out to plant hyacinth bulbs. My burled joints creak as I plunge a trowel through the soil, revealing naked worms reeling in crisp air, burrowing back through dank holes. “Look at the worms,” I say to my son. He cranes his face into the hole, then pops up, nose covered in soil, a worm writhing between thumb and finger. “Gentle,” I murmur. The worm thrashes on his now-open palm. He hunches over it, crooning, “hello, sweet worm” before brushing worm-skin with boy-lips and letting it drop.
In the spring, we’ll pick the hyacinths and bring them to the grave of a sister he will never meet. I’ll teach him where to find the metal vase for our flowers. Together, we’ll pour water from the jug to fill the vase and splash the stone. With cloths, we’ll rub the dusts that settle on the name beneath our open palms. Then he’ll crane his face down to murmur, with gentleness that makes my heart writhe and thrash, “hello, sweet sister.” I’ll hunch over him like a burled willow weeping brittle leaves.
Orah Dawn Levin-Minder is an emerging writer. She lives in Massachusetts with her partner and their five children.
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Oh, so beautiful.
Gorgeous and tender and heartbreaking. Thank you for sharing.
The beautiful book-ended repetitions of the burled willow weeping brittle leaves … exquisite.
Magnificent
Stunning. Brought tears. Thank you for sharing.
the language, and the repetition. So effective. “burled,” “hello, sweet sister” “hello, sweet worm.”
Splash the stone. Burls. Boy-lips, Beautiful. Thank you.
I couldn’t ask for more depth or emotional resonance in a short piece of writing, This is heartbreakingly beautiful. Thank you Orah.
Eloquent and touching. Full of love.
When I wonder, as I often do, if I can find a fresh way to say something…, you say, “brushing worm skin with boy lips,” and it is so exquisite, so moving, so simple, that it takes me a moment before I can move on.
Great writing is the most powerful mentor. And your writing is stunning.
Agree
What a stunning poem!
Heartrending and beautifully told through the lens of mother and son. Thank you for sharing.
Such quiet joy. And pain. Truly a beautiful piece.
Orah – you take our hand and help us up the staircase to your heart SO immacuately here. We feel your love. We feel your anguish. We feel you. Thank you so much for sharing.
So lovely! Thank you for sharing this.
Tender and beautiful. Thank you for sharing….
Gorgeous. Thank you Orah for this beautiful gift.