By Helen Collins Sitler
My brother, nearly seventy years old, sits at his kitchen table. A sharp tang bursts from the bottle of nail polish he has opened. His wife, barefoot, sits facing him. Her cane stands upright beside her. Her walker waits across the room. She has removed her old nail polish. Her hands, sometimes trembling from Parkinson’s Disease, can perform that task.
My brother gently lifts her right leg up, positioning her foot on his thigh. He dips the brush in polish, then bends forward. A stroke in the center, a stroke on each side. Big toenail done. He dips the brush again. Next toenail. Dip. Next. Alexa plays light jazz in the otherwise silent room.
He lowers her leg back to the floor and lifts the other to his thigh.
Decades ago, he was an All-Star. Blasting a line drive into center field. Sliding into second base. An athlete dependent on large muscle groups. Later, those muscles lifted heavy boxes at work and still move furniture and mow lawns. Now he has added a different skill set, the fine motor movements needed for delicate painting.
All toes polished, my brother’s wife places one hand flat on the table; today the hand is still. He attends to her fingernails with practiced brushstrokes. “Do we need a top coat?” he asks.
“Not today,” she replies, waving her polished fingers in the air.
Helen Collins Sitler lives and writes in Southwestern Pennsylvania. She has been a Pushcart nominee for creative nonfiction. Her flash nonfiction has appeared in Post Road, Hippocampus, and The Sunlight Press. Longer essays have appeared in Harmony. Her craft essay appears on the Brevity blog.
Image by Jess Bailey Designs courtesy of Pexels
Gorgeous
So tender.
Beautiful. You have captured a tender scene of love and connection in old(er) age.
Perfect
Emotional. Great short writing. True love.
A beautiful moment. Thank you for sharing . . .
This is so perfect. You’ve captured the moment and the love with elegance and simplicity.
What a breathtaking scene you have created here! I love that you end the essay with the wife expressing her “agency” by deciding to forgo the topcoat.
The sweet act of practicing love.
Absolutely sweet. This is a relationship.
So many ways to show love–thank you.
Congratulations, Helen! So happy to find “The Manicurist” here. It is a beautiful piece and I am thrilled to know you and your work.
Thanks, Nancy
This is indeed, a beautiful thing. Such a simple story yet so deep, so touching. I love seeing it published, Helen, well deserved.
You’ve cheered this on since the beginning. Thank you.
Such a simple story yet so deep, so touching. I love seeing it published, Helen, well deserved.
Beautifully written and captures the love in a simple gesture such as painting someone’s nails.
Thanks, Dodi
Gorgeous.
Gentle and simple and caring
You are a keen observer
Helen what a lovely essay about love. So vivid, I can smell the polish and feel their love.
Thanks, Barbaara