By Tiffany Doerr Guerzon
I sat on a bench, leg stretched out to accommodate my throbbing, swollen knee. Our plan was to hike, climb and adventure our way through Maui during our first vacation since lockdown, yet I managed to hurt my knee on day one. Watching from a distance as my family wandered around a botanical garden, my throat tightened. I wondered if this foreshadowed my future. How long before I could hike my favorite trails again? Would I need surgery? Would my knee ever be the same? I tasted salt as the tears I’d been holding in spilled over. My son glanced back at me, his eyes filled with concern. I offered a shaky smile and then turned to gaze at the ocean, trying to gain control of my spiraling thoughts.
Then I saw it. An oblong silhouette rising from the sea. It wasn’t until I noticed the dangling, serrated fin that I realized it was a humpback. Time slowed as the multi-ton mammal hovered vertically above the water line. “Whale! Whale!” I shouted, punctuating my words by stabbing the air with my tourist-shop cane.
My family turned toward me, wearing matching quizzical expressions as the humpback tilted her mottled blue-gray body on its axis and fell sideways behind them, slapping the surface before sinking under. When they finally turned back to the ocean, all that was left was the ghost of her splash, a cloud of seafoam and hope hanging above the sparkling water.
Tiffany Doerr Guerzon is a freelance writer, essayist, and creative nonfiction instructor. She enjoys looking for beautiful things in everyday life. Her work has been featured in Chicken Soup for the Soul, CNN, Motherwell, Parents, the Christian Science Monitor’s The Home Forum, Sky Island Journal and many more. https://authory.com/TiffanyDoerrGuerzon.
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Someday I would love to see a whale. Nice piece.
Thank you!
A cloud of sea foam and hope hanging above the sparkling water. Gorgeous.
Thank you for your kind comment.
It’s the journey not the destination. Enjoy the views along the way from wherever you sit. See the good. Lovely essay.
Thank you for taking the time to comment.
Loved this. Really “beautiful.”
It was truly miraculous to see, thank you.
Sometimes we’re just where we need to be. Lovely piece.
Agreed. Thank you.
My sentiments exactly!
Thanks for reminding me that sometimes beauty comes to us when we stay put.
So true, thank you.
Whales seem to inspire. You’ve done a wondrous piece of inspiration.
Thank you so much.
What a lovely image. This story evokes. The fact that nature can pull us from the brink of our own emotional breakdown is magical. Tiffany Guerzon has captured this perfectly. Brava.
Thank you, Faye!
I love it Tiffany!!! I hate it when my sister is right… “things happen for a reason…” smile
So true Teri, thank you for commenting.
That last line…lovely!
Oh, how I labored over the last line, glad you liked it!